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Everyone in the arena had their eyes transfixed on the man. He simply walked up to the two doors, and with his trust in the princess, he chose the door to the right. If it turned out to be the tiger that would consume him, so be it. He knew that whatever the outcome was, he would not have anything to lose. Either ways he had lost the princess. All that was in his mind now was- would the princess give me death, or grant me another girl. Somewhere deep inside him he actually hoped that the girl he loved so much would grant him life, but he knew the princess inside out. If she could not have something, she would not expect anybody else to have it either. He snapped back to reality as the door opened. From the dark came a growl so loud it hurt his ears. He knew what the princess chose for him. Her jealousy proved to be greater than her true love for him. So this was it. He turned to look at the princess for the last time. Her face was as pale as ever, so white, and so merciless...
This is an ending that I like very much. It is well imagined and described. He surpported
ReplyDeletewhy the princess choose him to die and how her jealousy is greater than her love. I liked it very much and could learn things from it. It would then help me in my own composition.